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Josh Schwebel

• 10:52 AM, Mar 21 (CET)
Briefly, but how?

mbourche

• 5:56 PM, May 5 (CEST)
See below

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• 11:25 AM, Jun 15 (CEST)

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Josh Schwebel

• 10:48 AM, Mar 21 (CET)
Which symbolic order do you mean here? The symbolic order that divides economics from aesthetics? Or do you mean Lacan’s concept?

mbourche

• 4:39 PM, May 5 (CEST)
Not Lacan… I’ve changed the formulation to clarify.

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This seems resolved.
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Should this read "appeared to be the result"?
Arnoldian ideal

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"Arnoldian" could use some context for the ease of the reader.

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civilize

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Could we say "manage populations under the guise of 'civilising' them"?

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Can we use another work here?
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as "a" or "the" culminating project.
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I am not certain of the right language here. Should this read "ability"?
Schwebel’s context-driven practice has strong institutional critique accents but is hard to pin down

Josh Schwebel

• 10:53 AM, Jun 6 (CEST)
I find this sentence awkward, in that I am not sure what is added by saying that the practice is hard to pin down.

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I think that your edits have resolved this, Josh.

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Josh Schwebel

• 8:14 PM, Apr 8 (CEST)
I wish that you also mentioned the labour of the staff working behind the scenes here… since you mention the dependency that the galleries have, but that isn’t followed up. They neither subsidize the artist`s labour, nor do they subsidize the staff’s really.

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See added at beginning of following paragraph

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CARFAC

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Do we feel that CARFAC need a tiny bit of contextualisation for unfamiliar readers?
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dependant?

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Josh Schwebel

• 8:32 PM, Apr 8 (CEST)
You mention this dichotomy in your introduction on NETco, maybe tie this together more clearly?

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Schwebel’s context-driven practice has strong institutional critique accents but is hard to pin down

Josh Schwebel

• 10:53 AM, Jun 6 (CEST)
I find this sentence awkward, in that I am not sure what is added by saying that the practice is hard to pin down.

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• 11:53 AM, Jun 15 (CEST)
I think that your edits have resolved this, Josh.

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