The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Re: updates

Marina Vishmidt <████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Dear Lauren,

Hope all is well. I was just (rather belatedly, it's true) making a start on the revision and realised that, as sometimes unfortunately happens when am in a rush, I had not saved a copy of the draft because I assumed it would be returned to me with comments. As you put your comments in an email, I find myself now without the doc - would you be able to send it to me? Apologies to ask you this, so embarassing!

thank you so much!

Marina

On 29/03/2022 22:51, Marina Vishmidt wrote:

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Marina Vishmidt <████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Marina,

No problem at all! 
I’ve attached a copy of the text. 

As an update; we are currently thinking through citation style and footnoting across the essays, so if you could include your referencing in this next draft that will be helpful as we move forward.

Warmly,
Lauren

Attachments:

  • file Vishmidt_Disintermediation_Draft 1.docx

Marina Vishmidt <████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

Next draft attached! I am not sure if I addressed your structural suggestions fully, though I did fully agree with them - would be great to know your thoughts. Joshua's first-person account was helpful as well in bringing the actual situation of the project space more to the forefront of the text.

I think I only have the two main references, the new epigraph from Brecht and the Michel Feher ref towards the end, so am happy to provide full details for those once you have the citation system in place.

all my best,

Marina

On 01/05/2022 10:45, Lauren Wetmore wrote:

Attachments:

  • file Vishmidt_Disintermediation_Draft 2.docx

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Marina Vishmidt <████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks very much Marina!

I’m really looking forward to reading this new draft. You will hear back from me and Josh shortly.

Gratefully,

Lauren


Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Marina Vishmidt <████████████████ >

dear Marina,
thanks so much for this updated draft. I also look forward to reading it!
warmly,
Josh