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Re: text

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Josh,

I re-read the text this morning and, although I confess to not totally remembering its first shape, I do feel like this version is more robust. 
I can see going into this now in more details, to clean up language and point out some places that might need work.
How do you feel? Do you want to do a first run at pointing out places █████████ should consider and I can come in with edits?

xL



Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,
I just returned to Berlin yesterday after an overnight flight, so I am totally unfit to make decisions today.
Overall, I think the text is certainly better, but there are also some places that can be clarified. I also have some images that I want to suggest. I will work into it more once I am in better shape mentally, probably tomorrow morning or latest on Wednesday.
I hope that’s ok.
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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Of course! Take all the time you need.
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