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CCA Annual Grant Report Checklist (Oct. 1st)

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hey I just did a bit of clean-up, but feel free to ignore / refuse, they are just suggestions to improve flow / remove redundant adjectives... x

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Thank you!! Super helpful! I'll continue to work on the text now :)

Camille-Zoé Valcourt-Synnott (she/her) — Fundraiser/Grantwriter
The employment of a fundraiser/ grant-writer on behalf of Forest City Gallery is the artistic work of Joshua Schwebel. The employee is funded by a grant awarded to the artist by the Canada Council for the Arts. This email and subsequent correspondence may be included in documentation of the artwork.


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Josh Schwebel (Google Docs) <comments-noreply@docs.google.com> To: The Employee <employee@forestcitygallery.com>

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CCA Annual Grant Report Checklist (Oct. 1st)
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I would say hung

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