The Employee by joshua schwebel
About this project

Re: Copyedit of Essays so far

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Jessica,

I’ve had a chance to review your edits - thank you for the precision and clarity you have brought to them!

Bourcheix-Laporte’s text is with her now, along with your notes on citations, and hopefully we can circle that text back to you soon. I’ll keep you posted. 

Josh’s text is also with him as I thought that there were a few places that would benefit from his review. But, as you know, he is traveling and exhibiting at the moment, so we should be patient with the turn around on that text. 

Carlesimo, Vishmidt and Kopel, were very straight forward. I have attached my responses here for the texts to move forward with you.

Thanks again and keep in touch if you need anything,

Lauren



Attachments:

  • file 1. Carlesimo JA Edit_LWreview.docx
  • file 4. Vishmidt JA Edit_LWreview.docx
  • file 6. Kopel JA Edit_LWreview.docx

Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Great! Attached the two final essays and the Carlesimo with comments mostly resolved (and some explanation from me for you to review). If you’re okay with the Carlesimo edits, you can clear those comments and stop tracking and consider that the final file.

Good call on that hyphen in Kopel!

Best,
Jessica

Attachments:

  • file 1. Carlesimo JA Edit - resolved.docx
  • file 4. Vishmidt JA Edit FINAL.docx
  • file 6. Kopel JA Edit FINAL.docx

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks!

Kopel and Vishmidt are great. Carlesimo is also now final.

Bourcheix-Laporte is really happy with your edits and sends her regrets about the citations - apparently she just finished a degree using APA! She will have the text clean and back to me/you by mid-March.

I’ll keep you updated as things progress. 

Best,
Lauren




Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Excellent! Glad to hear that Mariana is happy with the edits.

J
---------------
Jessica Antony (she/her)
Writing | Editing | Communicating

Please note that my email response time is, on average, 48 hours.