Very weird that Pages and Word don’t seem to talk to one another effectively. It looks like the rest of the comments have shown up, though.
As for this question, I mistakenly treated “between” as a conjunction, so for accuracy/consistency:
Footnote 5 should read: "These quoted excerpts are transcribed from a recorded debriefing conversation between Carlesimo, the employee, Camille-Zoé Valcourt-Synnott, and me that took place on January 13, 2022 (a second part of this conversation took place on April 13, 2022).”
Footnote 7 should read: "Quoted from a conversation with Carlesimo, Valcourt-Synnott, and me, January 13, 2022.”
I’ve made a few more changes after a closer look at footnotes 43 & 48. Initially I used the shortened version of the initial citation (as per Chicago), but perhaps in this case, given that there are only a handful of these citations of the conversations on Jan 13 and April 13, straightforward consistency makes more sense. So, instead of the shortened version, they all read: "Quoted from a conversation with Carlesimo, Valcourt-Synnott, and me, January 13, 2022.” We can go either way on this - your choice.
And a final nit-picky item that I was thinking about while I was brushing my teeth this morning: on page 15 with the quote that inaccurately reads “do not” (where we’ve inserted [sic]), a clearer solution to that problem could be to remove “do not” and replace it with an ellipsis. Then the sentence just reads as it should and we aren’t asking the reader to do a bunch of work to correctly understand the meaning. (I realize “a bunch of work” is probably an overstatement, but making the read as easy as possible is always helpful, in my opinion.)
I’ve attached the version you sent with these suggested changes so you can see what they look like.
Let me know what you think!
Best,
Jessica
