The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Re: The Employee - copy edit review

Mariane Bourcheix-Laporte <████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hello Lauren,

As promised, here is my reviewed and revised text. I've accepted all of Jessica's suggestions and minor edits and left a few comments for her to review. Somehow the last version of the text that I had sent you in September got lost in the mix -- it had all the citations converted to Chicago. I've transferred them over to this document and adjusted based on Jessica's entries. 

Do let me know if there's anything else you need me to do.
Do you have a sense of the timeline moving forward?

Thanks!
Mariane



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  • file 5. Bourcheix-Laporte JA Edit_MBL.docx

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Mariane Bourcheix-Laporte <████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Dear Mariane, 

Thanks so much for this and apologies for the missing text! That’s really kind of you to go back in and move all the content up to this version. I’ll pass this back to Jessica and let you know if anything further comes up.

As for timeline, we are planning to publish in 2023 and giving ourselves some space within that goal for some exciting new contributors.

Warmly,
Lauren


Mariane Bourcheix-Laporte <████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Sounds great! I'm excited to see the finished product!
Best,
Mariane

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Mariane Bourcheix-Laporte <████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks Mariane - we will keep you in the loop!

L



Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Mariane Bourcheix-Laporte <████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Mariane,

Just one final note from Jessica, and you can let us know if any other changes need to be made before we mark it as the final version. 

Thanks as always,
Lauren

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  • file 5. Bourcheix-Laporte JA Edit FINAL.docx

Mariane Bourcheix-Laporte <████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

Looks great! In response to Jessica's comment, please delete 'CanCon'. 
Please thank Jessica for her excellent copy editing... I love it when my work gets polished like this!

Keep me posted. Good luck with the final stretch.
Mariane

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Mariane Bourcheix-Laporte <████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks very much!

’Till soon,
Lauren