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Josh Schwebel

• 11:17 AM, Dec 12 (CET)
I am a bit confused here, because my first reaction as a reader is to ask, which quote. I think this indication could be made more specific, either by naming the authors or by specifying that you mean the epigraph leading the text.

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education and experience required

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Is some further information needed here, or do we assume that the reader will know. I suppose I am curious to know what it is now - 5-10 years and a PhD to be a Director?
airly substantial level of professional experience

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Hill Strategies Research

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It would be helpful to give a very brief phrase on what this is, to establish the authority of the quote
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I think "community" needs specification. The London community or broader?
conversations it initiated with FCG’s audience

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I would be extremely interested to hear an example of this. Audience response is one aspect missing from the book and it seems like Teresa could really contribute to that here.

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Josh Schwebel

• 11:09 AM, Dec 12 (CET)
This intro does a great job of laying out a premise of overwork, but doesn’t affirm it beyond a projection. Can you substantiate / confirm your suspicions that you would have your work cut out for you? I just think this paragraph leads up to the point of saying something, but doesn’t follow through.

Josh Schwebel

• 11:10 AM, Dec 12 (CET)
this can be as simple as "I am working at my limits", or I work well beyond xx hours per week.

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