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While this employment structure makes a sort of sense here (to the extent that any existing structure of employment makes sense to anyone but employers, who design jobs to allow them the greatest possible profit, the most stolen labor)—an artwork within and as a workplace, with muddled channels of reporting, accountability, and compensation—the frequent misuse of independent contracting to enable employers to shirk their responsibilities to their workers has to shape our understanding of the project’s examination of work.  | Lauren Wetmore • 12:09 PM, Oct 18 (CEST)As a single sentence, this is dense and I am not following it with ease. Would it be possible to articulate these points together but with a reading-rest point or two? |
 | Dana Kopel • 8:49 PM, Oct 30 (CET)NewTotally, how does this read? |
Uber, Lyft, and Doordash spent $200 million in California last year on a restrictive ballot measure, known as Proposition 22  | Lauren Wetmore • 12:26 PM, Oct 18 (CEST)As an anecdote, my partner was voting in California when this was on the ballot and we felt that the wording for this proposition was extremely misleading, so as to coerce voters into voting for it even if they didn't support it. |
 | Dana Kopel • 8:56 PM, Oct 30 (CET)NewAs a new California voter this doesn't surprise me at all, there's at least one measure on the ballot now that does the same thing |
Clynton Lowry, “The Ecstasy and Exploitation of Art Handling,” interview by Kressent Pottinger, New Labor Forum, September 2017, https://newlaborforum.cuny.edu/2017/09/29/the-ecstasy-and-exploitation-of-art-handling/.  | Lauren Wetmore • 12:19 PM, Oct 18 (CEST)Chef's kiss to this citation structure! Thank you for taking such care with these. |
 | Dana Kopel • 8:58 PM, Oct 30 (CET)Newfrom one editor to another ;) |
cum  | Lauren Wetmore • 12:34 PM, Oct 18 (CEST)I am uncertain about style in this case. Why is it italicised here and not in paragraph 3? |
 | Dana Kopel • 8:58 PM, Oct 30 (CET)NewOnly because I forgot to italicize it earlier lol |
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CommentsWho’s the boss when your job demands such self-management that you internalize your lack of fair pay as your own fault?  | Josh Schwebel • 11:10 AM, Oct 18 (CEST) |
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When art workers justify our low wages and poor conditions, we internalize the logic of self-management and individual responsibility that helped create those conditions in the first place.  | Josh Schwebel • 11:10 AM, Oct 18 (CEST) |
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how the state in turn absorbs and reproduces the logic of capital;  | Josh Schwebel • 11:12 AM, Oct 18 (CEST) |
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in terms of  | Lauren Wetmore • 11:55 AM, Oct 18 (CEST)Could this change to "in the scope of" or something similar, to more specifically indicate that what is no accident is that Josh is highlighting this fact? |
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independent contractor designation  | Lauren Wetmore • 12:11 PM, Oct 18 (CEST)Thank you for taking up and so precisely articulating this point! |
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—-  | Lauren Wetmore • 12:20 PM, Oct 18 (CEST)I believe there is a missing word here. |
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What can we, as art workers, do about it?  | Lauren Wetmore • 12:30 PM, Oct 18 (CEST)Yes! This needed a fine point put upon it - that the work implicates other cultural workers. |
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Who are our fellow workers?  | Lauren Wetmore • 2:08 PM, Oct 18 (CEST)I think that this phrase could be lost as the point has been articulated. |
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If that’s who holds the power to either ease or escalate our exploitation then—in the absence of a boss—that’s one place to march.  | Lauren Wetmore • 2:29 PM, Oct 18 (CEST)Way to stick this landing!!! |
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Suggestions | Josh Schwebel • 3:48 PM, Oct 18 (CEST) |
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