The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Re: Copy Editing for The Employee

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

 

Hi Jessica,

Please excuse the small novel of an email that this will be! Josh and I wanted to make sure to send you as much information as possible. That said, I am sure that there will be aspects we didn't consider, so please do not hesitate to get back to us with questions. If you like, we could schedule a meeting once you have had a time to look over all the material, to go over any think that jumps out to you. If that doesn't seem necessarily, questions over email are totally cool.

As an update on the scope of work, today I realized, in transferring the texts from online to Word, that Google Docs was not including the footnotes in its word count. As a result, the overall anticipated word count of the book is looking more like 35K. (Fingers crossed that this increase does not affect our working together!) The total word count of the 5 texts I am sending out today is around 26K.

Here is a list of specifications and notes that we have gathered in anticipation of you working on the texts:

> Chicago Manual of Style applies. We have made efforts to bring everything into this style, but there are still quite a few straggling details that need to be brought into compliance.

> Canadian spelling throughout

> Teresa's introduction will be the first text in the book, so hers should lay out all the full terms and titles and abbreviations in brackets. From there on the texts can use full titles or the approved abbreviations, as the author has decided, but there is no need for bracketed clarification. (Of course, Mariane's text brings in a lot of terminology that is specific to her text that can be treated normally).

Abbreviations include:

- Canada Council for the Arts or CCA

- Forest City Gallery or FCG

- artist-run centre (note lower case and french spelling) or ARC

- Canadian Artists' Representation/Le Font des artistes canadiens (CARFAC)

Teresa's intro also details the dates of The Employee, so those can be left out of subsequent texts, except where dates are specific to a point being made.

> We want to structure the citations in the Chicago style, with citations in endnotes for each text but a big bibliography at the end of the book. Mariane uses in-text citations, which need to be switched to endnotes.

> How to style covid: I have seen that the CMS prefers COVID-19 in all caps, but I find this jarring, so please use Covid-19 or the Covid-19 pandemic (note lower case p).

> How to style "employee" variations:

- The Employee > When the writer is referring to the artwork it is The Employee

- the employee > When the writer is referring to Camille-Zoé Valcourt-Synnott  

> List of correct spelling of names:

- Camille-Zoé Valcourt-Synnott

- Joshua Schwebel

- Mariane Bourcheix-Laporte 

- Marina Vishmidt

- Teresa Carlesimo

- Dana Kopel

- Lauren Wetmore

> A few areas to look out for, that I know are not stylistically consistent throughout, are numbers, emdashes, dates, and oxford commas.

That's all for now, but Josh may also want to chime in with a few notes.

Looking forward to reading your feedback!

Warmly,

Lauren

Attachments:

  • file Bourcheix-Laporte_The Employee_V1 to JA 30.1.23.docx
  • file Carlesimo_The Employee_V1 to JA 30.1.23.docx
  • file Kopel_The Employee_V1 to JA 30.1.23.docx
  • file Schwebel_The Employee_V1 to JA 30.1.23.docx
  • file Vishmidt_The Employee_V1 to JA 30.1.23.docx

Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ >

Hi Jessica, Lauren,
Sorry for my email silence, I have been following in the background because Lauren has really covered all the bases. I don’t have anything of substance to add, only to say that I am excited to be moving the project forward to the next step, and am grateful to you, Jessica, for your involvement.
Best,
Josh

Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> Cc: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Good morning Lauren and Josh,

I welcome a novel-style intro to new projects - the more information, the better! Thank you for all of this detail, this is incredibly helpful. I’ll let you know if I have any outstanding questions and/or if a call would be helpful. 

I will also prepare a style sheet for this project, which will outline how I’m treating the text and the editing decisions made (and will include all of the detail you’ve helpfully already clarified for me), and will send that along with the copyedited text. No problem about the additional word count with the footnotes, either.

I’m looking forward to getting started on this project! 

Best,
Jessica
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Jessica Antony (she/her)
Writing | Editing | Communicating

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Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Thanks so much Jessica!
Wonderful news that you will create a style sheet.
Happy reading,
Lauren


Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Lauren,

A quick question for you re: notes. Do you want the endnotes numbered consecutive throughout, or to restart with each new essay? If they are to be consecutive, I’ll have to wait to do that once I have all of the essays, so wondering now how you’d like me to treat them.

If they are separated by essay, we can still include a full list of Notes at the end of the manuscript, organized by essay, followed by a full bibliography. Or, we can include the Notes at the end of each essay, with a full bibliography at the end of the manuscript (personally I find this the most accessible way to format them). Otherwise, if they are numbered consecutively, the Notes make more sense to appear at the end of the manuscript, followed by the full bibliography.

Thanks!
Jessica
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Jessica Antony (she/her)
Writing | Editing | Communicating

Please note that my email response time is, on average, 48 hours.


Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hi Jessica,

I agree that the notes should restart with each essay, then we have a full bibliography at the end of the book. 

Thanks for the question!

Lauren


Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ >

Agree as well!
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Jessica Antony <███████████████████████ > To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com> Cc: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >

Great - thank you!

J
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Jessica Antony (she/her)
Writing | Editing | Communicating

Please note that my email response time is, on average, 48 hours.