Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >
To: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>
Hi Josh,
Greeting from DC! I’ve just completed and edit of Section One (still in Google Docs). Feel free to dive in there if you are anxious to get back to the text before I tackle Section Two, which I anticipate I will be able to devote more time to next week.
My praise of the text still stands - it is strong, legible, and an essential component of the book. Aside from some copy editing, and a few questions, I would like to suggest that the concept of “doubling” needs a little more context for the uninitiated reader, particularly as it underpins much of the concept you are putting forth in this section.
I hope my edits are clear. Let me know if there are any questions.
xL
Greeting from DC! I’ve just completed and edit of Section One (still in Google Docs). Feel free to dive in there if you are anxious to get back to the text before I tackle Section Two, which I anticipate I will be able to devote more time to next week.
My praise of the text still stands - it is strong, legible, and an essential component of the book. Aside from some copy editing, and a few questions, I would like to suggest that the concept of “doubling” needs a little more context for the uninitiated reader, particularly as it underpins much of the concept you are putting forth in this section.
I hope my edits are clear. Let me know if there are any questions.
xL