Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ >
To: Marina Vishmidt <████████████████ >
Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>
Dear Marina,
Thank you for your patience as Josh and I have been reading and discussing this new draft.
We are both blown away by how the text is developing. Your argument continues to ferment and solidify in ways that have very exciting implications for the work. It has been a pleasure to go deeper with you.
This time we thought that it would be useful for Josh and I to track changes and notes together with you in a shared document, which you can find here Our responses are a combination of copy edits, questions, excitement, and suggestions.
Depending on how you would like to proceed, perhaps it would be useful to spend time with our notes for a a week or two, then we can all come back together over a third draft at the end of May?
Always here for questions and discussion!
Warmly,
Lauren