The Employee by joshua schwebel
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Re: publication updates

Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > To: Mariane Bourcheix-Laporte <████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Dear Mariane,

We continue to be amazed by your essay. You are covering an incredible amount of ground with precision, and in such an accessible writing style. Honestly, I feel grateful for the level of discourse and commitment you are bringing to this project!

Josh and I have both been through the most recent version, and have added some notes - questions, musings, copy-edits, etc. We are thinking that, with your agreement of course, this round will be the final in terms of the meat of the text. 

With regards to notes and citations, I’m sorry to say that we don’t yet have an agreed style yet. I suggest is that you go through in the style you feel most comfortable, and if we choose another I will re-format it. 

Thank you again Mariane. Both Josh and I are at the ready to discuss anything that comes up in this final polish of a valued document. 

Warmly,
Lauren


Mariane Bourcheix-Laporte <████████████████████ > To: Lauren Wetmore <████████████████████████████████ > Cc: Josh Schwebel <privatejosh@gmail.com>

Hello Lauren and Josh,

Thank you both for your considered comments and edits. It's been a very interesting text for me to dive into, so I'm happy for this enthusiastic reception!

I will go through the text and make final edits by the end of next week if that works for you. I agree that this should be the last substantive round of edits and will be happy to give you carte blanche on copy edits and minor adjustments after that. 

I've been using APA style for in-text citations and will finalize the references in this style. I can help harmonize the references afterwards as needed. 

Thanks,
Mariane